Updated Watercolor Grapes... Fail

I told you I'd update on those grapes, so here it is. We had no class today because of February break, so I though why not. It still looks horrible in my opinion. The shadow coming from the grapes makes it even worse. I am starting to like the colors for the grapes. One Larry told me to not use again is the gouache which is the opaque watercolor paint. I used a white to highlight the grapes in this painting and he said it's just better to stick to the habit of using the white of the paper as the highlight.